There was a girl always smiled.
Whenever she was asked help, she just smiled.
Her name is Maggie.
She was 14 years old and she was an honor student.
She always won the first prize at any contests and any exams.
One day, she left her book in her classroom.
Her friends were wondering what’s in that book.
They opened the book.
What a surprise! Words written by blood!!
05. 01. 2012
I love Stephen. And we love each other very much. But He is fiance of Lucy, my cousin. However he must have loved me and it’s his destiny! Lucy really wants to marry Stephen? It sounds ridiculous. How can she do that! Lucy is absolutely out of her mind.
As Lucy came by my house, I was at the front door. I pretend to forget my key but this trick didn’t work. Because the door was not closed. Hopelessly I entered my house with Lucy. When I went to the bathroom Lucy opened my bag. She wanted to see my secret book. That was a good chance to me. When the minute Lucy opened the book...... I muttered to her.‘Don’t touch mine, an evil fox!’.
Today I planted a lot of flowers in my garden. And I gifted her a spear instead of gravestone. That spear is shinning above her. It will make me happy whenever I think Lucy.
05. 02. 2012
After a long time, Stephen visited my house. Because he claimed himself to be the botanist, he begged me to get into the garden. I said clearly :‘Never’. But after a few minutes, he was in the garden. I could see him through the window. He observed something odd with a magnifying glass. He picked up some black hairs. Unfortunately he might find clue. He should have not gone there. He came back to living room with shocked face.
There was a book on the fireplace and the blood from the book dripped into the fire. He approached to it.
And... now, he is sleeping deeply under the flowers.
Maggie’s Friends quickly closed the book with trembling hands.
Where is Maggie?
They feel maggie’s eyes see them from somewhere.
Theme : Psycho
9 words : a key, flower, spear, sleeping, eyes, fire, magnifying glass, smile, a book
20120671 Mina Choi
답글삭제Hi` You guys made a very scary story!..but that was very intersting~
Also, those words are very good used in the story!
What a creative, interesting, scary, creepy, and magnificent story you have created! You did such a great job writing this and using words and language precisely to create an effect! Honestly, it's some of the best creative writing I've seen from students. I especially like your use of "muttered" and other descriptive words. My favorite part is this line: "And... now, he is sleeping deeply under the flowers." It wonderfully says so much...without saying it! Very well done!
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